http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump We make pretty pictures. en-US Sun, 01 Aug 2010 06:15:34 +0000 http://bbpress.org/?v=1.0.2 q http://www.punaji.com/search.php http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-5547 Fri, 23 Jul 2010 08:45:18 +0000 Lmnop 5547@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>the lighting in the last painting is amazing.<br /> the previous two monster sketches are looking kind of flat mainly due to the lighting on the green one, and the lack of contrast on the red guy, and the balance of the green one seems off. Love the sorta eel head design of the red guy though. The moleskine sketches are very impressive. Good to see some more stuff from you. Keep it up! </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-5545 Fri, 23 Jul 2010 02:43:24 +0000 forgottenfigure 5545@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>hai guys. Been doing a lot; i&#39;ll show a little.</p> <p>supposed to be daily studies, should go do some:<br /> <img src="http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/Chriskhaos/img263.jpg"></p> <p>I want to start getting a digital folio going<br /> <img src="http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/Chriskhaos/greedshowalmostthere.jpg"></p> <p>Gotta have fun:</p> <p><img src="http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/Chriskhaos/drawscancolor2.jpg"></p> <p>Revisiting an older painting of mine:</p> <p><img src="http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/Chriskhaos/DSC_3039.jpg"></p> <p>edit: whoops </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-5120 Thu, 25 Feb 2010 00:36:10 +0000 forgottenfigure 5120@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>SCAD, sir.</p> <p><img src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_MAIM5blwxqA/S4YaxTf0fQI/AAAAAAAAAFU/VHecjuSu0mI/s400/Danny.jpg"><br /> Pretty old painting( couple weeks) but I haven't posted it here yet.<br /> also Online art competition has 4 paintings, 3 of which you see here before you. Rates muchly appreciated. $$$ makes me feel less bad when I buy pokemon cards...<br /> It's now required to register to vote D: self promotion is a bitch.<br /> <a href="http://www.chromaonline.com/competitions/art_comp_09_10/round_2" rel="nofollow">http://www.chromaonline.com/competitions/art_comp_09_10/round_2</a><br /> I'm on page 2 and 3<br /> :D </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-5079 Fri, 12 Feb 2010 19:11:03 +0000 Retronym 5079@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>Well done. Agree with adam. I think it may have been improved if the left side was just extended a bit, but its a functional piece. Good job tackling a weakness. Impressive sky.</p> <p>Where are you going to school? </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-5032 Sat, 30 Jan 2010 21:41:13 +0000 forgottenfigure 5032@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>adam: thanks for the critique! I was working from some specific references and angles, and I sacrificed having the trees smack dab in the center for the ability to have the land hitting a vertical 1/3rds mark, and having the horizon nearly on the horizontal one. Also the tree's came out a lot darker than they are in the painting- although they are still quite dark. Landscapes are something I need to work on most definitely. </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-5028 Sat, 30 Jan 2010 18:04:23 +0000 Adam 5028@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>I could really learn something from looking at how you did your water!</p> <p>I feel the composition is kind of weak, though. Judging by the rule of thirds, your focal point is too centered for my taste, and it leaves my eye wandering all around the painting. The rocks also seem a tad too light compared to whatever shadows are being cast on the trees; from how they're lit I'd assume they were being lit from the opposite side, yet the rocks seem like they're being lit from a whole different angle!</p> <p>Overall, it's very nice and I enjoy the colors. The clouds are done very well, too.</p> <p>5-starred your other paintings, by the way. :) Keep at it, man! </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-5026 Sat, 30 Jan 2010 15:49:20 +0000 forgottenfigure 5026@http://www.punaji.com/ <p><img src="http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1128/lakecommission.jpg"></p> <p>Here is a commission I worked on over winter break. It's pretty large- 30x40. Landscapes, among many other things are a weak point of mine- but I believe this turned out relatively successful for what it is.<br /> Also, this painting and two others of mine are entered into the chroma art competition. I would appreciate if you took the time to rate them- whatever you think of them!<br /> <a href="http://www.chromaonline.com/competitions/art_comp_09_10/round_2" rel="nofollow">http://www.chromaonline.com/competitions/art_comp_09_10/round_2</a> </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-4990 Sun, 24 Jan 2010 00:05:23 +0000 forgottenfigure 4990@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>Zach: yep it is very pouty, partially because she actually has very pouty lips, partially because I didn't paint them well.<br /> Dan: If any painting could be considered unplanned, it would be this one, as would be a slew of my paintings. " Hey sarah would you like to be painted?" "sure" " Ok lemme go get a milkshake first". haha.<br /> By structure, do you mean the actual 3d structure of the face? I believe both of these paintings show an ok understanding of the planes in question- while the details in the painting of sarah are a bit off, the big value shapes are very close to what I was seeing, same goes for the self portrait in white. If by structure of the face you mean the arrangement of the features of the face, then I may agree with you to a degree. I've got a long way to go for sure.<br /> Will: Thing with ratios is they basically go out the window when you do anything other than someone head on- unless you project it 3 dimensionally. The eyes themselves are wonky, but if you took into account the angle and their actual length( not including close shadows and make up) the 5 eye ratio would probably still stand. Thank you for commenting, however. I don't intend to act like I'm always aware of all the errors I make, but I do want to keep things like that in mind.<br /> Adam: Thanks for the encouragement, man :]</p> <p>Thanks for feedback guys, honestly. i didn't expect to get this level of critique here ( not a bash of punaji, I love this place) </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-4989 Sat, 23 Jan 2010 12:09:41 +0000 Adam 4989@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>i wait 3 days and get no replies and you get three in 8 hours! blast you! :D</p> <p>i really like the portrait. very nice volumes and good tones. will and dan are right in what they say, but still, great stuff dude. keep at it </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-4988 Sat, 23 Jan 2010 11:10:27 +0000 will 4988@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>ratios! five eyes across(this is the quickest shit i could find <a href="http://goldennumber.net/face.htm)the" rel="nofollow">http://goldennumber.net/face.htm)the</a> color and value on the face are good. i like the flowers a lot; more value looser hand and finer lines :D </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-4987 Sat, 23 Jan 2010 03:05:16 +0000 DanFessler 4987@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>seems to me that you aren't spending enough time planning the painting - getting the structures right before you detail out. This is a common thing for digital artists to fall into (myself included) because of the forgiving nature of the canvas, but oils really do need a ton more care in the early stages.</p> <p>Both this and your "self portrait in white" paintings suffer from lack of good facial structure. </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-4986 Sat, 23 Jan 2010 02:34:02 +0000 zachary 4986@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>It's been three months since I've posted here.. Shame. I like the light but her face looks pouty and keep up the optimism but always be positive about such a pretty model hah </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-4985 Sat, 23 Jan 2010 01:56:38 +0000 forgottenfigure 4985@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>Zach: Haha I'm actually lame and drug free. Thank you for your comments. my teacher loved the drawing.</p> <p>A portrait of a friend done here at college. Not without it's flaws but practice is practice:<br /> <img src="http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/6199/sarahtt.jpg"> </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-4108 Mon, 28 Sep 2009 21:44:04 +0000 zachary 4108@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>I've never really seen flowers drawn like this before<br /> you've been doing drugs haven't you!?</p> <p>honestly I think the composition looks fine<br /> there's a lot going on<br /> but your mark making is sick<br /> specially the etching on the leaf veins<br /> maybe more value range?<br /> I know it's sunny </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-4104 Mon, 28 Sep 2009 20:21:08 +0000 forgottenfigure 4104@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>Hey guys- This is my first piece in my drawing 2 class. We started with only the contour of the bouquet so I didn't know what the real assignment was- couldn't visualize ahead. Most of it is admittedly done from imagination( sick the whole weekend and couldn't go to the extra sessions) I'd would be very grateful for any critique concerned with and major values in the image and their effect on the composition. Anything that can be changed remotely easily will be- butttt I basically only have till 1 pm tommorow to work on this so HURRY UP AND CRIT : DDDD<br /> ..<br /> Please?<br /> <img src="http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/4818/theconversationalists.jpg"></p> <p>detail:<br /> <img src="http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/8531/detail2i.jpg"></p> <p>Eep I should have expanded a little more. The assignment was dealing with mark making- thinking of abstract ways to make marks and such, The stems to the right are just continued from the bouquet on the left- to fit it in and for a compositional element. There are also some figure ground distortion- ish things going on( such as the stems) The black spot( darker than it actually is due to poor photo) is mainly there to balance out the values to the right- and it was the darkest area in the still life set up.</p> <p>Thankyou for viewing :] </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-4074 Sat, 26 Sep 2009 19:25:29 +0000 forgottenfigure 4074@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>A painting in celebration of the return of Punaji : D<br /> <img src="http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/4795/bongisthefirstwordpeopl.jpg"> </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/4#post-3948 Mon, 06 Jul 2009 15:17:51 +0000 forgottenfigure 3948@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>Hah thanks, I don't see how those are very inspiring but I'm glad they are :]</p> <p>Lolz BLOGGING. I just made it last night, so It doesn't have anything you haven't seen yet, but check it outt : D<br /> <a href="http://chrispariano.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">http://chrispariano.blogspot.com/</a> </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3936 Wed, 01 Jul 2009 20:11:06 +0000 Joshua 3936@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>Wow, man. Absolutely. Really inspires me to start painting again. </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3935 Wed, 01 Jul 2009 19:57:53 +0000 forgottenfigure 3935@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>Heres another from last night- don't know how I feel about it. Kind of eh<br /> <img src="http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/Chriskhaos/DSC_0034.jpg"> </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3929 Tue, 30 Jun 2009 17:34:28 +0000 forgottenfigure 3929@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>inane: thanks :]<br /> David: sorry, please try again later. We enjoy your business<br /> Retro: I am as cold as cobalt blue<br /> quark: haha I wish I had two different colored iris'. the challenge I had was that one is in shadow, and one is in the light, and I also had multiple light sources( mainly lit with one warm light, partially lit by 6 cool light bulbs) which may have affected the iris color. On top of that I have no delusions of being a good colorist, yet. </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3928 Tue, 30 Jun 2009 16:15:08 +0000 quark 3928@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>It looks like you have 2 different coloured irises... Is that for realz or just the stylistic choice? Because if you don't in real life, I think it would be more powerful if both irises were the same colour, that punchy aquamarine/blue. Otherwise... you rape us all.... :(.... ;) </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3927 Tue, 30 Jun 2009 11:29:57 +0000 Retronym 3927@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>way to go, forgotten. </p> <p>how could you be so insensitive? </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3926 Tue, 30 Jun 2009 08:56:36 +0000 David 3926@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>Yeah, fuck it, I quit. You win. </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3924 Tue, 30 Jun 2009 01:41:15 +0000 Inane 3924@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>That is BITCHIN', mah man. </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3923 Tue, 30 Jun 2009 01:03:23 +0000 forgottenfigure 3923@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>concept art says that it's portrait and composition month<br /> So here's me warming up for it<br /> ( the color correction I did to the photo makes it look a little bit better than the actual painting I think : p)<br /> <img src="http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/Chriskhaos/portrait.jpg"> </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3920 Mon, 29 Jun 2009 16:06:27 +0000 Xion 3920@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>ah okay. In that case well done :) </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3918 Mon, 29 Jun 2009 13:26:31 +0000 forgottenfigure 3918@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>Yeah. It was done from life, and the camera captured light in a different way than my eye. It would have been a lot EASIER if I had just painted from the photo, but that's not the point :p Something I've personally experienced is that in direct painting, white doesn't have the same value as it does in indirect painting, I don't feel like I'm painting higher key, but most of those highlights are pure, thick white, or a with a bit of a high chroma yellow mixed in. </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3915 Mon, 29 Jun 2009 12:17:32 +0000 Xion 3915@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>it looks not shiny enough? Needs more shiny. Bright highlights, as found in that nice shimmering surface in the ref. </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3912 Mon, 29 Jun 2009 03:22:53 +0000 forgottenfigure 3912@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>Maybe that was subliminal to off set the fact that he was rendered without said phallus?<br /> Painting broken glass is exactly 47.2 times harder than a face.<br /> <img src="http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/Chriskhaos/DSC_0020.jpg"><br /> <img src="http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/Chriskhaos/DSC_0015.jpg"><br /> <img src="http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/Chriskhaos/DSC_0017.jpg"> </p> http://www.punaji.com/topic/super-dump/page/3#post-3870 Tue, 23 Jun 2009 16:51:54 +0000 Xion 3870@http://www.punaji.com/ <p>man you make your stuff look so digital. That Charizard is such win. Other guy is cool too but if I scroll by real quick I keep seeing that long thing coming off his hip as a phallus. </p>