
I haven't really practiced drawing ladies. I should do that.

I haven't really practiced drawing ladies. I should do that.
Awesome rendering. I dont really have anything to add really. hmm. Make some more? :D

Second verse, same as the first. Except worse.
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Hmm, I love number one, it's wonderful. But, number 2, looks sort of like you simply took a guys head, and added lady hair.. Are you using pastels?
No. They're colored pencils.
The second one is so much better ... obviously I mean aesthetically and I'm sure that was your intention. And yeah, they do look like pastels.
I would have to disagree with Darion, I think the [EDIT]SECOND[/EDIT] one is pretty childish and not very feminine at all. The first one definitely captures that feminine essence much better. The second one is ugly as sin to me :\
To be fair, I think my renditions of women would be just as bad, so I feel it's only fair to qualify my crits with that statement.
i like the second one more, it's much more stylized. at times like these i like to say screw realism. the second one is just as feminine as the first.
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