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  1. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    I am the cool behind your fire, the shadow of everlasting desire.. so lets dance to this pyre and grow ever higher.. only then can we paint like a liar

  2. Banned

    Top_Bug

    Posted 1 year ago #

    Our hero is seen rifling through a cardboard box until he picks up a japanese lucky cat charm, pauses to look at it, and then puts it down.

    "Any idea where we're headed?", the uninitiated book-keeper asks.

    "From here we travel down the bumpy railway to calcutta.." our relatable hero explains.

    He goes on to detail, "this spirit is known for trying to make deals with mortals in exchange for something....."

  3. Dorsa
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    Dorsa

    Posted 1 year ago #

    What if every deity from the days of yore was merely a time-traveling tourist from thousands of years in the future, his (to him mundane) parlor tricks appearing to be “miracles” to the people of the time?

  4. William
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    William

    Posted 1 year ago #

    He who sleeps, forgotten, fulfill its dreams,

    She who wanders, reborn, in darkness sealed,

    You the shallow, with empty words, no deeds,

    Savior, give me directions, make me succeed.

  5. Banned

    Top_Bug

    Posted 1 year ago #

    heres a profile im working on check it out:

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    name: cantaloupe cross-section

    interests: chopping fresh heads of lettuce, afternoon shadows cast on urban tennis courts

  6. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    "afternoon shadows cast on urban tennis courts"

    nice

  7. Banned

    Top_Bug

    Posted 1 year ago #

    :-) (cool thread dude)

    -gold chains w/ semi precious stones

    -why cant i ask "why?" anymore?

    -a young professional struck with paralysis at the mere heat of its breath..

  8. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    I slipped on black ice

    frightened in the night

    after you, I plee

    to the end of this bitter fight

    so can we be

    everlasting

    eternity

  9. Dorsa
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    Dorsa

    Posted 1 year ago #

    I love that last one, Zach.

    Ps, is this just a misc poetry thread or a poetry-when-you're-high thread? 'cause I've definitely been assuming the latter.

  10. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    just a pot of poetry, a splash of certainty dorsa

    --

    under the floor

    hiding from a red hot sun

    but just a poor pup

    starving and lone

    what is my nature

    and your eyes opened

    together we are

    under the floor

  11. Member

    Xion

    Posted 1 year ago #

    There,

    In the black of the--

    Heart.

    In the back of the--

    Soul.

    On and on it rumbles, that trying tug of self-confidence's pull.

    But reality pulls back harder.

    It's hard to see from down here,

    In the spot of the--

    Lung.

    In the dimly lit--

    Hall.

    On the page of the--

    Test.

    The "Grand Scheme" of it all.

    But, whatever.

    Straining eyes only see bloodspots,

    so soak up the darkness -- or let it soak you.

    Just go blind.

    Because, whatever.

    This wire architecture is built through

    the veins in our hands,

    the veins in our hands making maps of our mental substrates.

    Roadmaps;

    Crissing and crossing country and county lines,

    but never escaping that frail wireframe within that murmurs:

    "Mediocre."

  12. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    I like the end :)

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    Xion

    Posted 1 year ago #

    Thank you :)

    Welcome to the pinnacle of the Earth.

    Can you see those bottle-humans, all filled with

    shit?

    Shit-faced liars filled to the brim with shit,

    and, well, shit, you know they know it.

    See, you can even hear their shit

    Each and every one of them saying:

    "You're full of it."

    Full of what?

    "Full of shit."

    And they make shit-colored games with people who say shit,

    and girls who shit in cups and eat other girls' shit.

    Say shit, eat shit, shit shit pies.

    All those bottle-humans, just living their shit-filled lives.

    And they even live in shitholes and stick shit in their shitters.

    Put some diamonds on that shit, sir, and watch that shit there glitter.

    Shit-talkers talk shit all the day long.

    And here you hear me sing about shit in this shitty, shitty song.

    Say shit, eat shit, shit shit pies.

    All those bottle-humans, just living their shit-filled lives.

    They shit bricks to build their shitty homes

    and Europeans shit out garden gnomes.

    Shit is a cuss word,

    shit is a verb.

    shit is a noun,

    synonymous with turd.

    Shit happens, shit stinks, shit sounds absurd.

    And bottle-humans shit more than shit shitting birds.

    Say shit, eat shit, shit shit pies.

    All those bottle-humans, just living their shit-filled lives.

  14. Member

    Joshua

    Posted 1 year ago #

    I really like that shit.

  15. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    Put some diamonds on that shit, sir, and watch that shit there glitter.

    that is the shit

  16. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    babe, do you wanna dance like betty page

    get lost in a galaxy, get hot like a sun

    don't need no ship, dont have time hun

    what a racetrack, I need my space back

    so drop those panties and I'll drop mine

    lets love

    we'll fall hard

    so don't deal it like a card

    to steal all my dumb luck

  17. Member

    Joshua

    Posted 1 year ago #

    Various lyrical tid bits for my band (I don't really expect anyone to read them, but still):

    Father

    If you are who they say you are

    Then I thank you

    But until you shake my hand

    You will not be

    Please tell them to stop demanding you are

    Otherwise I love thee

    If you are who they say you are

    Then I thank you

    But until you kiss my forehead

    You're not

    Uh-uh

    No way

    You're not

    Oh holy one

    If you feel I must burn

    For my ignorance of your being

    Then so be it

    But by that logic you're not a very cool entity at all

    Certainly not one I'd like shaking my hand

    So if you are who they say you are

    Then I'm grateful

    Until I kiss your hand myself

    You're not

    Not to be rude

    But if you feel I must burn

    For my ignorance

    Of your existence

    Then suck my cock in turn

    We'll start with one

    There's nothing to do

    Nothing to watch

    Nothing worth talking about

    We'll start with one

    We'll have some fun

    We'll start with one

    We'll have some fun

    We'll dance the dance of boredom

    And the dreams of the native minds

    The streams of vacant times

    We pass with our new born lives

    We'll have fun we'll move to 2 or 9

    Remember family we'll be fine

    We'll swim in the sand of morrowhere

    We'll start with one

    We'll have some fun

    We'll start with one

    We'll have some fun

    9 to 5 sounds real real nice

    But I'd rather get me a slice of

    Of the spirit world

    Circle the moon

    Without ever leaving

    My box of crayons

    Lets wake the Dead

    Lets wake the dead 2x

    I lie awake thinking of all the noises

    That are poisonous

    If you are not my friend

    You bet

    You had better run from us

    Step to your altar, clear your throat

    Prepare yourself to provoke

    The ones that were once where we are now

    Lets bring em back by being fucking loud

    Lets wake the dead 2x

    Rise and shine its overwhelming

    Break the barrier

    Lets get em rolling

    In their graves I bet you son

    You will hear the starting gun so

    Lets wake the dead

    Bring back the spoiled

    Lets wake the dead

    Lets show em all

    That they were once

    What we are now

    We'll break em free

    We'll break em free

    So listen to me

    And lets wake the dead

    Fay

    Where is she now

    Shes thinking of me

    But why can't she see

    Shes thinking of me?

    Where is she now

    I bet shes buying me gifts

    Gifts of love and acceptance

    Her pain will go away

    She'll just forget it

    I said HEY HEY HEY!

    Why don't you listen to me

    Just sing with me FAY FAY FAY

    Fay lets play

    Lets dance where are you

    It'll be like it was

    When you smiled into my soul

    I said HEY HEY HEY!

    Please just dance with me

    Its not too late late late

    So i just stare at the cars and the walls

    I stare at the people in the halls

    The loons and the goons and all

    They'll never know how much she cares

    So I just STARE STARE STARE

    Oh but soon she'll be standing

    Just standing there there there

    I said HEY HEY HEY!

    Why don't you listen to me

    Just sing with me FAY FAY FAY

    I said HEY HEY HEY!

    Please just dance with me

    Its not too late late late

    I got more if anyone responds to these :)

  18. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    We'll dance the dance of boredom
    And the dreams of the native minds
    The streams of vacant times
    We pass with our new born lives

    We'll have fun we'll move to 2 or 9
    Remember family we'll be fine

    my fave part, though I liked it all

  19. Member

    Joshua

    Posted 1 year ago #

    Maan, thanks Zach. You don't even know how much that means to me. I really dig your stuff too.

    Heres more:

    The Grocery Store

    Oh fuck

    Oh fuck

    Oh fuck

    They're looking at me

    I hope this doesn't mean somethings wrong

    Just look down

    You're alright, you're alright, you're alright

    Or are you?

    Just look down

    You're alright, you're alright, you're alright

    Is something wrong?

    I feel I'll know soon enough

    What could happen?

    Who knows but they keep looking

    What are they thinking

    Are they thinking what I think they're thinking- should I leave?

    They only mean harm when I get like this

    Just walk right by them- don't look scared

    Hide it

    They'll smell your fear

    Or do they?

    Just look down

    You're alright, you're alright, you're alright

    Apparently

    x3

    Warm Baby

    Like an old friend

    Returning from cold empty nothingness

    To conglomerate with your

    BONES

    BLOOD &

    BRAINS!

    And breathe life to a

    Warm baby

    Warm baby

    Warm baby release

    The baby grows old and dies

    Before you two really have time to catch up

    So you're left

    With a taste of relief

    Then nothing more than

    A memory that was oh so brief

    Warm baby

    Warm baby

    Warm baby

    I say warm baby release

    The World As We Know It (Basically a sister song to "We'll start with one"

    Jump in the water

    Forget your dispositions

    Descend toward the sky and

    Sink

    Sink

    Sink

    Lets change the world as we know it

    Though we never knew it anyway

    Lets play with the floral and fauna

    Before they blow it all away

    Just

    Sink

    Sink

    Sink

    Lets get lost in ourselves and breathe the open air

    Feel it in your bones and feel it in your hair
    Its real

    Now

    Feel

    Feel

    Feel

    Its

    Real

    Real

    Real

    Drink the Purple Punch

    Its a purple door

    To another world

    Believe in me

    Heed my advice

    Means are justified today

    Drink the purple punch

    Drink the purple punch

    Its a purple door

    To another world

    Believe in me

    Heed my advice

    Means are justified today

    Drink the purple punch

    Drink the purple punch

    Mr. Jones

    The ships going down

    Here's your cup

    Its all gone around

    Now its your turn to

    Drink the purple punch

    Drink the purple punch

    Roxy Cotton Tail

    Roxy

    Roxy

    Roxy Cottontail

    I said now

    Oh Roxy

    Oh how can I tell your tale?

    I said now

    Roxy

    (Roxy Cotton, Roxy Cotton, Roxy Cotton....)

    Must've had her a thousand times

    All day she hops around my shambled mind

    Shes my brown bunny

    I love her so much

    But maan I'm outta money

    She tastes like relief

    Its beyond my belief

    Of whats wrong and whats right

    My pain is her bite

    My warmth is her touch

    I love her so much

    But maaan

    I'm outta money

    Roxy

    Oh how can I tell your tale?

    Oh Roxy

    Roxy Cottontail

    Must've had her a thousand times

    All day she hops around shambled my mind

  20. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    we should start a band, we have something to say.

  21. Member

    Joshua

    Posted 1 year ago #

    seriously? that'd be awesome man. are you musically inclinded? what style are you interested in?

  22. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    I'm somewhat, I've been playing guitar, harmonica, and singing blues for a while now.. I want mellow distorted guitar with heavy bass and vocals

    shit man we could do anything and it'd be fun at this point haha

  23. David
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    David

    Posted 1 year ago #

    I'll sit my grandchild on my knee and say, "I was there, son. I was there when it all began. I saw them join with my own two eyes." And he'll look at me a long time, and say, "And you didn't even try to stop them?" Because you guys are going to become something ominous.

  24. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    awe.. I liked serial killers..

    this is something I'd like to sound like

  25. Member

    Joshua

    Posted 1 year ago #

    yo zach whats your msn messenger? i'm joshuaastorian@hotmail.com

  26. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    zach3427@hotmail.com, I thought I already had you..

  27. Member

    Joshua

    Posted 1 year ago #

    you have had me, zachary.

  28. Dorsa
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    Dorsa

    Posted 1 year ago #

    So I still don't know if this a place to post high-on-pot poetry, or just regular poetry, but I do know that I continously check this thread when I am high. Like now.

  29. Banned

    Top_Bug

    Posted 1 year ago #

    i murder' dem' for real, witnesses can slip on banana peel
    while im eatin cabana meals flown in from alaskan salmon fields
    and bitch u cannot wield - what u aren't used 2 holdin
    ur jaw drops when you see my arms are golden - ur foldin
    while im straight uppin the ante, cops cant seem to understand me
    cuz i got more bread under my mattress than they do up in thier pantry

  30. zachary
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    zachary

    Posted 1 year ago #

    guh thats fucking magic

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