1. scarfone

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   Posted 4 months ago #

   I have a big major piece to do for my painting class, Seeing as how much help everyone was for quark's painting I thought Id start a thread for criticisms and shit as I go along.. Ill be starting a sketch in paint in the next couple days.. here a small drawing of what i had in mind so you can get the idea... I know alot of porportions and such are off, but its just to get the idea... Some of its hard to see. What I have in the middle is a girl (my protagonist) smoking a cigar holding an apple, underneath a 4 horned rams skull, 2 guns bordering the bottom corners, a hyena with an ovaraptors head in its mouth in the left, a neo-nazi wearing a mexican wrestling mask on the right, cloaked figures walking over top, and a large white boa over the whole thing...

   Let me know your guys suggestions, comments, anything..
   

2. scarfone

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   Posted 4 months ago #

   I think the sizes of some of the figures will be bigger in relevance to others.. the skull will be larger, the figures on each side will be larger past the horizon line, and the main figure too.

3. scarfone

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   Posted 4 months ago #

   Stretched and primed my canvas, 30x36 and started to sketch out my image first in pencil, heres what i got so far... tips, crits and comments are greatly appreciated

   

4. Dorsa

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   Posted 4 months ago #

   Really liking it so far. What do you have filling in the rest of the space?
   Also: what animal's skull is that? If it's a cow skull, I'd redo the angle and shape of the horns.

5. scarfone

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   Posted 4 months ago #

   its the skull of the beast!

6. scarfone

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   Posted 4 months ago #

   Here it is so far, gotta get goin on this, its due next wendesday

   

7. scarfone

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   Posted 4 months ago #

   Let me know your thoughts

   

8. Retronym

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   Posted 3 months ago #

   The sharpness of the dark lines on the face are less evocative of small planes and more reminiscent of deep cuts, especially the creases of her smile on he cheeks. Same with lines of collarbone.

   Are you going to continue her body below the skull?

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