the designation number has a star wars feel to it, do you want that?
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is that pastel? looks great, much more dynamic than the first design
and tits :]
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Retro: No the number is just me saying it's the second version of the character. Not actually part of the character.
Gnarf: Yep it's pastel :3 colored on the comp though. At least the red was. Thanks
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hahaha my bad
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First evar self portrait after realizing I've never done one.
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haha that's so awesome. the neck's kinda weird, but i love everything else about this
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Thanks :)
I was bored in math. Failed attempts at cleaning up the lines from the lined paper resulted in...orange. -
So, that bird-guy-dude totally rocks! Expand on that design, please!
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there has to be room for talons in that concept
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Shaheen - I'm trying!
Ret - what do you mean?Sorry for the dump but I've been making many small things lately and nothing...goodish...biggish...refinable...ish. I've got some stuff too big for my scanner, I guess I'll post them when I find my camera. I know it's around here somewhere.
This is the best eye I've ever done. I'm so proud of it. Half looking at someone, mostly imaginary (after they turned around), and slightly book-referenced (I couldn't figure out how to do eyelashes)
Note: most all of these were done in math class. My math notebook is empty.
I should also probably take better care not to dirty my shit up.
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damn xion, love it, and i'd love to see it animated, even just a walk cycle.
Aight.
This is actually for another gig.Fine by me - less work.
I still want to finish this though - I like where it's going.
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really sweet bird designs man, the curves in the beaks are top notch
and the run is looking great, only i wish it had more of an arch in its back. the upper body looks a little stale without it.
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arch means it curves inward right? I'll get on that.
's weird though, cuz I totally had him with a concave back but he was standing too erect, I thought, so I just shifted him over to give him some lean.
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either way would work, you could make him lean forward or back to show him sticking his chest in the air. sorta like that fat kid type of run, like he's trying to catch up with someone. arching outward would make him look like he's in a hurry or sprinting. i dunno, up to you, but i'd definitely like to see that done without changing the character too much.
i mean, even the current lean looks fine, but his chest just looks really stale and large for some reason.
gah, now i sound like a critic, which i hate because i totally dig these piece as is.
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No problem, man, crits are why I posted it in the first place. No need for mindless approval, you know? Thanks alot :)
Still not done yet - haven't touched the hair, skirt-thing and neck needs tweaking, add ribbons streaming from back. -
I feel like the head/neck are a little too stiff for such quick movement. Also, although the skirt is flapping around, the hair isn't. Those are both minor crits, though. Overall, I think it's well-thought-out and I'd like to see you develop it more.
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all that secondary action is eye candy, i love it
his chest sorta makes it look like he's got a set of breasts now that i think about it, but i'm just being picky. it's looking great, finisher!
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Dorsa: good catch on the head movement - I'll fix it. I haven't gotten to the hair yet, though.
Gnarf: I was actually worried about that but meh, it's not that bad. Thanks! :)
I'ma finish it but like I said dude wanted something simpler and more cliche - this is what I came up with;
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Holy shit I forgot how good you were at pixeling, even better now!
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also on the first animation the sleeves are too seperated from the full sprite, i think its the slight shading on top of the shoulders, coupled with the black outline, id get rid of the black outline when inside the body area, like you did on this most recent still of the wizard
fucking awesome characters tho, love this recent little wizard, love the little details like the stitching around the base of the hat and the spikes around the shoulders
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man i totally dig the new character. not really cliche at all. animator!!
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DUMP
Self Portrait:
Figure painting stuff:
I've got another self portrait that I think looks more like me and is generally better, as well as more stuff in general that is better than everything here, but it's all at school hanging in the hall. I'll get it like, next week.
Good enough is good enough (aka. I'm trying to learn to be more timely in my efforts):
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#3,4,5 are great.. good figure
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thanks much man.
more did I find;
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The figure drawings are all swell. They've got a great sense of proportion and balance. Sweet colors on the last one, too.
Also, great job on that last walk cycle, the timing is right on.
If you're looking for areas to improve, you could always work on anatomy. You do a good job with the figure drawings but I feel like it doesn't translate as well to the stuff you draw from memory. Try and learn at least one new thing about human anatomy from each figure drawing you do.
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Ta' much Faktablad. You're totally right about me needing to learn stuff with each drawing. I was just trying to get stuff on the paper that didn't look retarded without really paying attention to why it was like that.
But anyway,
I'm done with figure painting class yay!
Now these are from my Beginning Painting class, in order of creation:
Still life
Still life
Still life
^ last one was reffed from this James Jean piece. Assignment was to find a picture and change it somehow. Can you guess what I changed?
...I am not enjoying painting.
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damn, have you painted before? i was much worse when i started- also, at least for me, painting gets more enjoyable the more you do it.
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I tried painting before, but not really so I don't count that. I treated it more like doodling, didn't learn a thing. That was years ago anyway.
So nope, I haven't painted before.
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